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Author: chutchins
Week 3 Behaviour Audit
Wednesday 19th October 2022 – Sizzling Starts
10 minutes: Highlight the vowel sounds/consonant sounds in your spelling words. For example, wonderful
Learning Intention:
We are learning how to write an exciting sizzling start for our Realistic Fiction narrative.
Success Criteria:
I can:
- improve my first draft by adding and altering certain parts of my sizzling start.
- edit and modify my chosen sizzling start.
- improve the punctuation in my writing by making sure that I use capital letters, full stops and appropriate punctuation in my writing.
- improve the vocab in my first draft, by adding tier 2 and 3 words.
Activity:
- Look back over your two sizzling starts and pick the one you like best. Then…
- Edit, modify, add and improve this sizzling start. It should look noticeably different after you have added/modified it. This should not be more than 2 paragraphs.
Things to check:
- Does my sizzling start make sense.
- How can I improve the content of my story?
- Underline words that you’re not sure if you spelt right and clarify these words using a dictionary.
- Is my sizzling start punctuated correctly? Make sure you have started each sentence with a capital letter and ended your sentence with a full stop.
- Have I punctuated my dialogue correctly?
- Does my sizzling start have enough descriptive language?
Tuesday 18th October 2022 – Sizzling starts
10 minutes: Synonyms (same meaning) and Antonyms (opposite) Write as many synonyms and antonyms as you can for each spelling word.
Learning Intention:
We are learning how to write an exciting sizzling start for our Realistic Fiction narratives.
Success Criteria:
I can:
- experiment by using different types of ways to write my sizzling starts.
- capture the reader’s attention by including an exciting sizzling start.
- edit my writing and correct punctuation and spelling.
Activity: There are a few common options to use to write your sizzling start:
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Pick one option and write a sizzling start using your CHARACTERS and SETTING from your first (Tuesday’s) plan.
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Pick a different option and write a sizzling start using the CHARACTERS and SETTING from your second (Wednesday’s) plan.
Work Samples :
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Alliteration:
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