10 minutes: Highlight the vowel sounds/consonant sounds in your spelling words. For example, wonderful
Learning Intention:
We are learning how to write an exciting sizzling start for our Realistic Fiction narrative.
Success Criteria:
I can:
- improve my first draft by adding and altering certain parts of my sizzling start.
- edit and modify my chosen sizzling start.
- improve the punctuation in my writing by making sure that I use capital letters, full stops and appropriate punctuation in my writing.
- improve the vocab in my first draft, by adding tier 2 and 3 words.
Activity:
- Look back over your two sizzling starts and pick the one you like best. Then…
- Edit, modify, add and improve this sizzling start. It should look noticeably different after you have added/modified it. This should not be more than 2 paragraphs.
Things to check:
- Does my sizzling start make sense.
- How can I improve the content of my story?
- Underline words that you’re not sure if you spelt right and clarify these words using a dictionary.
- Is my sizzling start punctuated correctly? Make sure you have started each sentence with a capital letter and ended your sentence with a full stop.
- Have I punctuated my dialogue correctly?
- Does my sizzling start have enough descriptive language?